Post by Danger Wasp on Nov 11, 2012 11:11:43 GMT -6
UPDATED: [12/17/12] added some information. also am taking my time carefully writing the story.
Story:
Takes place roughly 125 years into the future, mankind has begun colonization on a huge asteroid for raw metals to send to Earth as a futuristic mercantilism system.
Jame's job is a mechanic who mans a cargo lifting mecha, but one day after his shift ends...The power shuts off. Cases of gruesome deaths and Panic spreads throughout the territory. Shortly afterwards, the life supports go offline, and it becomes a fight for survival.
James now has to deal with the chaos and panic that is within the Prodromus and along the way will uncover the mystery behind the deaths, the Blackout, the life support and More importantly comes the question: What if Mankind has disturbed something? and is no longer wanted here?
characters:
James Portales:
A Man in his early 40's, he is a hard worker who took the opportunity of the asteroids colonization to better himself. He currently works for the Wetworks Centrich industry on the outskirts of the developing space city: The Prodromus.
[He is a worker, so Im trying to see which armor best fits his job]
Armor 1:echo009.deviantart.com/art/James-space-suit-1-338441979
Armor 2:fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/323/3/4/jame__s_suit_2_by_echo009-d5litig.png
Trenton Centrich:
The Boss of the Wetwork Centrich industry on the Prodromus and the man who created the blueprints for the space colony. He is in his late 40's and became greedy, however when the news of widespread panic and chaos begins along with the death of his family, Trenton unexpectedly assists James on his mission to find out what exactly is behind this problem, and more importantly to find a way to bring the life support systems back online.
Umbra (nickname that I gave it, won't have an actual name in the story):
whatever it is, it's in the Prodromus, somewhere. It could be the cause of the chaos, deaths, horrific visions, and more (or could it?).
the only problem is..No One has seen it, heard it, sensed it, or caught it on camera.
Does it exist? or is it just a figment of Jame's imagination and fear? what exactly does it want with those who live in the Prodromus...
(FEEDBACK is greatly appreciated)
Story:
Takes place roughly 125 years into the future, mankind has begun colonization on a huge asteroid for raw metals to send to Earth as a futuristic mercantilism system.
Jame's job is a mechanic who mans a cargo lifting mecha, but one day after his shift ends...The power shuts off. Cases of gruesome deaths and Panic spreads throughout the territory. Shortly afterwards, the life supports go offline, and it becomes a fight for survival.
James now has to deal with the chaos and panic that is within the Prodromus and along the way will uncover the mystery behind the deaths, the Blackout, the life support and More importantly comes the question: What if Mankind has disturbed something? and is no longer wanted here?
characters:
James Portales:
A Man in his early 40's, he is a hard worker who took the opportunity of the asteroids colonization to better himself. He currently works for the Wetworks Centrich industry on the outskirts of the developing space city: The Prodromus.
[He is a worker, so Im trying to see which armor best fits his job]
Armor 1:echo009.deviantart.com/art/James-space-suit-1-338441979
Armor 2:fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/323/3/4/jame__s_suit_2_by_echo009-d5litig.png
Trenton Centrich:
The Boss of the Wetwork Centrich industry on the Prodromus and the man who created the blueprints for the space colony. He is in his late 40's and became greedy, however when the news of widespread panic and chaos begins along with the death of his family, Trenton unexpectedly assists James on his mission to find out what exactly is behind this problem, and more importantly to find a way to bring the life support systems back online.
Umbra (nickname that I gave it, won't have an actual name in the story):
whatever it is, it's in the Prodromus, somewhere. It could be the cause of the chaos, deaths, horrific visions, and more (or could it?).
the only problem is..No One has seen it, heard it, sensed it, or caught it on camera.
Does it exist? or is it just a figment of Jame's imagination and fear? what exactly does it want with those who live in the Prodromus...
(FEEDBACK is greatly appreciated)
