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Post by Danger Wasp on Dec 17, 2012 22:04:42 GMT -6
Now, Im not an english freak, nor am I overtly creative (unfortunately), but this seems like a decent start, and with the right writing, it could probably be really great! some parts of it still seem a bit cliche, but every machinima has got to start somewhere right? yep. I'm taking my time with the story, just to make sure it doesn't end up being too cliche. |
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Post by coffeebowl117 on Jan 28, 2013 14:24:48 GMT -6
I see nothing in what he posted as the original idea as having ANYTHING to do with RvB... it doesn't sound comedic at all... I think it sounds pretty cool, even though I don't understand it completely. Where the heck did the RvB reference even come from, cuz this machinima looks like something that would be epic and possibly scary. Somebody explain! Cheers.
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Post by iGotzNoSkittles on Jan 28, 2013 18:16:54 GMT -6
I see nothing in what he posted as the original idea as having ANYTHING to do with RvB... it doesn't sound comedic at all... I think it sounds pretty cool, even though I don't understand it completely. Where the heck did the RvB reference even come from, cuz this machinima looks like something that would be epic and possibly scary. Somebody explain! Cheers. The post was edited, originally it was a entirely different concept/story that was similar to Red VS Blue. Though it's now reformatted into a different story. |
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Post by coffeebowl117 on Jan 29, 2013 18:47:21 GMT -6
...Oh. I feel silly, mah b.
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Post by aspectandroid on Feb 2, 2013 13:44:09 GMT -6
This story actually sounds like something I would like to participate in, it seems complex and with the maps this can go really smooth.
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Post by Danger Wasp on May 9, 2013 11:56:14 GMT -6
Once again I'm modifying the story. this time fusing the ideas from the RvB like machinima and the Suspense machinima that is mentioned. If you want to comment on the new idea, feel free to do so. just give me some time to do the modifications.  |
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