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Post by christiansvideos1 on Dec 8, 2012 14:05:42 GMT -6
so this machinima is about two boys named Tom and Alex walking around on complex admiring halo and suddenly a man peeks out of the wall(wall glitch) and tells the two boys to go to a place called hacker island (which is a place where modders can do anything they want with out getting banned)because their was a slip up in the system and the watchers(banners) are tracking them down and the Tom and Alex need to help them because their the prophecy. the Tom and Alex think it over and go and jump in the wall and teleport to Ragnarok. then watchers appears and they start killing/banning people, so their are a few people left as the Tom and Alex learn the ways of fighting the watchers because there the only ones that can do it. ;D
p.s. please reply on your opinion
p.s.si know its kind of hard to understand but when i start it it'll make sense
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Post by alexis91977 on Dec 17, 2012 8:05:10 GMT -6
cool dude.
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mjo96
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Post by mjo96 on Dec 26, 2012 20:01:18 GMT -6
Im a bit confused, but from what I understand, it is a bit cliche, maybe if you could elaborate a little bit more and make it clearer, I could have a better understanding and give some real feedback.
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Post by christiansvideos1 on Jan 1, 2013 13:14:16 GMT -6
thanks for the feedback ill keep that in mind
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kingsangos
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Post by kingsangos on Jan 5, 2013 16:16:30 GMT -6
This seems like one of those random B-Movie standard kinds of ideas and we hardly get a lot of those in the Halo Machinima Community.
The idea seems promising but I must warn you that writing these kinds of ideas down is hard work. You don't want it to be taken too seriously but at the same time not too zany if you want to keep it consistent. If you can nail down the writing and the voice acting, I would say that this idea could be interesting.
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