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Post by 808highdef on Nov 21, 2012 15:47:11 GMT -6
Link:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8ZjiUMgSn8&list=UUzPuvqDTgA0eki_d4OEegqw&index=1&feature=plpp_video
This is my first Halo 4 Machinima. I really hate how theres no no-weapon walking animation. And also how your arms move back up when you walk instead of being lowered. But whatever.
Description: An insurrectionist uses a prototype advanced combat suit to aid his comrades against the UNSC. After being notified of this, Captain Jay disobey's his admirals orders and uses a updated version of the advanced combat suit in order to seize the suit of the insurrectionist. And if you're wondering, yes, I was paying homage to Iron Man and War Machine. I-M-1 and I-M-2 stand for Iron Man 1 and Iron Man 2. Lol
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Post by Danger Wasp on Nov 22, 2012 0:01:16 GMT -6
It's interesting and entertaining. The intro scene reminds me of the Halo: legends episode "The Prototype".
Camera work also needs some improvements, again in the begining scene you heavily used the camera shaking method (also you overshook it to the point where the camera would lose focus on the subject)
some shots however were interesting, but other were too long, especially in the fight scenes (where the cuts are supposed to be quick) other than that it's fine.
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Post by 808highdef on Nov 22, 2012 17:21:33 GMT -6
thanks! I agreee I was abusing the handheld camera thing. Lol my original concept was just a straight up Iron Man vs War Machine because my nephew wanted me too make that. But I decided to make it into this. And although the intro may remind you of the prototype I actually ripped it off from gundam for that part. Im a little disappointed about the lowered weapon walking too. But what can ya do. Anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism.
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